Update on comic

Ive change the panels by making the ones in the middle the same width and also putting one around the title page at the start of it all.

Final Comic?

Ive now got to a stage where I've got 4 comic strips and have completed them and here they are.

These are my final piece's I have been working on for the last 2 weeks I feel that the drawings and images are really strong and work really well and the sun and moon work well which is really good with my style and im really glade Ive chosen to do my work in this format and also a comic strip, now one thign that the people said in my group crit was that of the paneling which is really annoying me now and which I will be sorting out as soon as Ive finished this blog post and that was the fact that the middle ones are bigger which doesn't make sense but did when i first did it, and also the top piece isn't put around a border like the rest which I have no idea why I didn't do this at the start but will be doing so from now, also another thing was it seemed like the moon could be pluto so maybe my whole idea for this is a bit of a shame but this have defeltly helped me learn in the sense that I need to spend more time on charactsing and researching into what will make sense to over people.

character development

Half way though the compation project

I've chosen to go with the idea of the sun and moon relation ship between each over and how they can get together, now Ive tryed to get a 4 page comic out of this story but have just got one joke out of it which is really not me so my tutor has said that I can 4 page do a comic strip which means 4 comic strips which will work a lot better for my work and experimentation.

Compation

So are new breif is to enter a compation out of the list they have given us and in which I have chosen to do the comica comic compeation which is to make a short 4 page story about anything as long as its original and is 4 pages, at the moment I have come up with 5 ideas and here they are.
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First idea is called battle of tommorw's lunch which is about all the good food and bad food fighting to be this guys lunch for tommorw.
2.
second story is all about the long distance relationship between the sun and the moon and hwo they get together.
3.
Uptown is all about two worlds that never see each over but always help each over out in small ways.
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Fourth idea is you are what you which is about you turning into what you eat and this is such a silly idea because even if you eat all the right food you turn out being that to haha.
5.
This idea is the sillyest its about what my head of year said on my first day which is the year of mistakes in which its me making loads of mistakes and then Geoff my head of year saying dont worry year of mistakes.