Comic club

we have decided to make a colective comic all togather based on the theme hidderen magic ive been working on this idea that starts off in this gun factory and then turns out a man doesn't put the finishing piece into the gun and which means that people cant use it there for people cant kill there for hidden magic is born, here is my draft.

People at comic club really enjoyed my take on hidden magic and thought drawings worked well, how ever some things i do need to change in this, first of all the drawings need to be scaned in better resolution which can be easily fixed no problem, also the first page of panels need to go from left to right instead of right to left, this ha really helped me figure out comics with just one simple mistake and hopefully the next time I do a comic Ill be able to put this into pratice.