Lukes 2nd editorial image

For this weeks article luke has chosen surfing and how it should be an Olympic sport. going into this I really found the article interesting and to why surfing should be in the Olympics rases loads of questions and different ideas into the sport which is great to see, moving on with this i once again choose a sentence to work from an reference from and that was "If we build all the stadiums and no one shows up it will be an embasement to the sport and to the Olympics" with this i got to work on making a few drafts once again to send to luke. This way of working really helps me as i get all my ideas out of the way in the first few hours of working on the idea and then i can move on alot easier and make my final drawing look the best in can be and I feel I may do this in the future to better my work.

What I love about drafts is that you dont have to have the finished piece of the work to get across what your trying to say, with the first one i focused on the fact that you shouldn't care about the Olympic gold but instead think of the sport and with this I showed the gold medal on the side of the beach and the surfer riding of into the sunset, this was a good idea but it seems my drawing and humour wasn't going to show in this as strongly as the second image which was about the surfer turning up but the crowds not and i showed this by having the Olympic rings colours into a deck chair showing the olympics but not even everyone showing up, and then having the surfer look angry and upset, this was working but as luke said in his feed back the surfer needs to be doing something elkse as it isn't greatly clear as of what his doing and with the deck chairs i felt i had to make them completely empty to be able to show off that no one will turn up.

So with my reflection on this I went a head and started working on the final piece and I felt i may have done a very good job on.

So the things Ive added and taken out are the the fact that no one is actually in the chairs i find this is much more humours than the original draft and I"ve also added the tumbal weed which makes it alot funny in fact that no one has actually turned up and to finsh it off I made the surfer actually sit down instead of standing up and surf in away he actually isn't doing anything wic the adds another level to it, now the bad things i feel is that I might not have really taken the best subject mater from this article to show it off completetly but then again i feel it is a stand alone strong image which is good to see with my work and that its getting stronger.